Planning & Preparing a Pitch (P3,M2,U21)
Planning & Preparing a Pitch (P3,M2,U21) Original Pitch- For my first pitch I presented my proposal on a prezzi to show my ideas visually. The purpose of my pitch is to gain feedback from peers to allow me to present my final pitch to the best standard, while meeting client requirements. https://prezi.com/view/xMz3UlXvovq5a20wcOx7/ Feedback- Following my pitch, I got given lots of positive feedback but in order to improve for my final pitch I have taken these pointers in order to develop my final pitch successfully; - 13-20 age range is said to be quite wide - not specific - Change of price - as the original is £4.50 so is a huge saving for subscription to be £23.99 (huge saving) - 4.50 x 12 = £54 - USP should be on it's own - Specify gender to be more focussed - Too much text - cut down so it is not too much writing (boring) Improved Pitch- Here is my pitch with changes from my feedback Improvements made: - M...
